Thanks , finally a comment i can work with ,and indeed i wrote it in some sage style poetic form , and yes i should have pointed this out better . Thought calling it raw would do it . The downvotes came from other comment's totally unrelated to it , i made on other places . No anger over not being successful , i am learning , i know nothing , the coin is not my goal . To me it's learning how to communicate true creative expression's . A DV with no feedback , is so frustrating for me ,.. could have put some pictures in to . ;-)