Working in a love relationship is, without a doubt, one of the most complex jobs in human relationships, because in the other person we find a reflection of ourselves that we often do not understand (or do not want to see); that is why, when I see those couples celebrating their golden, silver, diamond, etc., I wonder how many concessions both (or maybe only one of them) have made to remain united in time. To be a couple is to go hand in hand to achieve a common goal, and that requires both of you to be on the same frequency and hop on the same mode of transportation to reach that goal pél. Your poem is very personal, but at the same time universal. A hug!
Note: Try to publish in bilingual, English - Spanish, this will give you more visibility. Your work deserves it.
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