Hey,
I'm not saying your entry is unqualified or anything like that, it's actually very good. I'm just saying that you can do more better (I'm saying it after listening to your singing multiple times).

You actually did a great job, sorry if my words hurt you.

here's some feedback: focus on camera angles little bit, and focus on your background, it looks like you're in a studio or something (it's great), use lights - try to create the vibe and sing from your heart (which you're already doing).

Looking forward to your next post 👍