A very nice one indeed. Fabulous. No one could interpret the meaning of the title or how shadows can be portrayed in such a twisted manner. Such a beautiful threatening piece. I am speechless.

I like how you repeated specific lines, that kept me hanging, to be honest. I was losing my patience too but then the knock surely changed it all. It was a good story.

I felt the storyline is a bit off but the message is sent, about moving on and valuing everything. Nice one.

The theme is not common. I like how you have connected the three different stories and made them into one. I was not prepared for the moral of the story to be like this instead, I thought of some supernatural

Narratives, I like first-person narratives. I thought the story has a connection to fantasy until when I reached the ending to unfold something else entirely. I like how opportunities and scopes still

The approach with which Mike proceeded to talk with his dad is undoubtedly the most chilling approach I would say. This shows the strong bond of understanding and sentiments that they both shared. As the

A very true point of focus but it is one that is being ignored by many partners. People think more on the line that finding an appropriate partner is itself a tiresome job and considering other factors

Finally! The terrible wonder of living for thousands of years is awfully tiresome. Finally, it ended and for some reason, I feel at ease.

The much influence a particular someone can make in our life is just abnormal but it is true. Sometimes, we forget who we are and get lost as dust. You have portrayed that in the story, I liked it.

A very interesting story but without a climax? We readers are still left without knowing if Alfred and Adam will find the medicine and will their medical research be successful and that is the true beauty

Your dramatic style is surely impressive. The game is on and we all are waiting to see the results. It is too early to say anything, the game is on and we all can predict some here and there.

The more readers can connect the more I feel better.

I like that part about stories being puzzles, it is an art after all. Looking forward to reading more of such stories.

Thanks.

Thanks.

Such themes are quite rare and looking at your post really made me realize that I barely write anything related to parents and family. Hope to see more of such posts and looking forward to digging something

It dawned on me at that moment; I realized that I had been living my entire life to please everyone. This realization is one that kills and teaches a person to lead the right life and this is what makes

I was heavily confused about the theme of the story and I feel I will need to read it a few times before I understand it for real. I liked how the story confused my mind.

The nights has always been full of voices that sometimes, it is so hard to tell whether they come from outside or from the back of his head. This sentence is written too beautifully and appropriately.

Thank you so much.