Thank you.

As you haven't watched it yet, it is a MUST-watch. You will surely enjoy it.

I feel a little touched. John was a good man in heat but then was e a criminal too. Will he be bailed soon? Was it justice to him or not, I cannot comprehend well. I feel sorry for John.

This is such a well developed fictional story. Your title of the story is well surprised me as a reader and I could not anticipate beforehand what waited for me. It was a very good read. I liked it how

I like your sense of humor and taste in fantasy. You hook your readers till the very end. I was thinking of the movie, "The night at the museum" while reading yours. I had a great read.

It is nice. Broken hearts and tragedies always make their way through in love.

Hoping to do so but still I am unable to grab it.

Thank you.

I still couldn't pen it down.

It might not be much of a bother as long as you can pen them down and release them from your imagination. That's how it works for me. And, your length of imagination and mix with reality actually caught

Beautiful.

You have a great sense of imagination. The prompt was just lightning and the way you framed your story, wow. I am just overwhelmed.

Loved it. It is a great story. I am inspired. Nonetheless, I was surprised to here that her hairs were white.

Ummm my bad. I need to be more clear next time then. I was aligning my lines thinking the last 4th and 3rd paragraphs voiced out the problem that she was going through, it was the societal pressure that

When we become an adult, due to a lot of pressure we seem to dismiss to become stronger for our own sake and our own dreams. I didn't want to give a specific reason for her to be in this dismissal state,

hahaha served them right. Well written. I liked it a lot.

The photographs taken are so beautiful and natural, especially the ones near the water.

The photographs are breathtaking.

Not a bad progress, it is just the beginning of something big.

I wanted to keep her existence unknown but you are right, the depth gets lost. Thank you for your advice. I will read and work on character development more.