The arm foreshortening seems to have gotten better in a hurry :D

There's still a bit of anatomical weirdness going on (don't swear it too much, you pick interesting angles which is better and more fun than sticking to boring ones, but does mean it's harder to draw XD). I'm also struggling to understand their expressions but I think I'm lacking context and also I'm a bit hopeless at reading people in general XD

Not surprising this is your favourite so far, the rendering is beautiful.