the feedback comments from my instructor,

Wow that is quite an extreme idea. Do you think something like that would actually work or do you think because of the severity of it people would be more likely rebel against this program or did you think that it will work?

How well did lockdown work for COVID. When people are told that they are not allowed to do something it is natural to want to challenge that.

We are also talking about psychology an health, so how do you think instilling fear in every person is going to do for their overall health.

Please next time split this into more than one paragraph please so that I can track each component better.

Thank you