oh dear @madals, what a great story, one of the best I've read lately! the whole subject is so fascinating and at the same time disconcerting. I can imagine these migrating souls, life and death. and the final part, so poignant, a good soul that struggles with itself because it does not want to be the condemnation of another soul ... beautiful :-)) congratulations for the analysis of your characters and for the curie vote
ps: can you earn enough with your writing?