ehy dear @byn, what a good story !! your writing is running fast, I have not left until the last word. I heard every sigh of the protagonist and I sweated with him. I did not expect his transformation into a being with powerful energy, but it is good to see how his fear and his desire to defend his sister together can give rise to a supernatural force. What will they do now ??
are you a professional writer?
congratulations on your curie rating and thanks for sharing