Oh, is there a time limit on posting a story and then commenting on others? This went out on schedule, then I slept, it's been a busy day, and I didn't realise I had to rad and comment in the community as a matter of urgency after publishing. I did presume I had a few days to find time to read and comment over a cup of tea when I was ready. Please let me know if this isn't the case - I couldn't find anything in your community rules @jayna - sorry I'm not sure who is policing here.