I'm actually quite chuffed with myself. I got Chatty to do a critique of my work and here's the big takeaways: 

• work is more literary than transactional
• Her biggest strength is authenticity. Many Hive accounts read as if they are written for Hive — engineered for engagement or token rewards. Riverflows writes like someone who would still write even if no payout existed.
• She clearly understands Hive culture very well. The comments and community participation show someone embedded in the ecosystem rather than merely posting into it.

That's nice. However, apparently I'm not as tight with analytical rigor (fair) and can be stylistically overindulgent (also fair)

I'm going to take hte good stuff and be proud of myself for my authentic voice and lack of care for self promotion and hustling payout.

The best thing is, however, is that AI seriously doubts I use AI. Nice.