@yaziris Thanks for the suggestion, I have modified that line. I hope it will fit into the plot of the story now.

@millycf1976 Thanks, I was on a trip white water rafting in the Himalayas. We enjoyed the trip doing so many activities after a long time since the Corona had stopped almost all outings. I hope this dreaded

So the entire family was in the cheating business? But how long, I don't think they will survive for long!

St. Patrick's Day with a different angle. I can see where your story is leading to and I love that angle.

Thanks bro, I enjoy your stories too!

I read all these posts and found them motivational. Congrats all the featured authors, looking ford to more from you all.

Yes Admin @jayna I did, but I was traveling long distance on a two wheeler so I was not much active for almost 2 days. Thanks for the Prize :)

Thanks.

Thank you, it was different and different from what we read about Adam and Eve, isn't it> So I thought why not make some changes even if I had to add a few weird ideas. Thank you @princessbusayo

Thanks, I am enjoying every story that I read and how @theinkwell prompts do for my skill. I am sure I will improve my skill by reading and writing in this wonderful community.

You know when I write about snakes, Admas and Evas, I forget all about tenses 😄 so much so that I might begin from future and end up in the past or vice versa. You know kind of back and forth. No, you

True, family is as important as money or even more than money but some people forget their family in their quest to earn money. Nice lesson.

That was a delight to read this innocent love story. Simple but joyful :)

Thank:)

To my best guess, he wanted to see how it felt like flying in the sky, thank you!