There is a real open honesty to this poem that shows how your father worked relentlessly for you and the rest of your family.

I particularly liked this stanza as it gave me that feeling of tiredness, and your father's relentless will to better his position.

Heavy eyes and tired legs
Giving up on parties and kegs
Boilers roaring on cold winter days
Gaining wisdom and showing your grays

Great poem, I really enjoyed it 👍