Loving this poem @erodedthoughts 👍
It gives me the impression of a poem about a new lover if I'm honest.
Chat all-day
Resposibilatilies fall to the side for me
Laser focus you retain all-day
Fate drew us together
Those lines I've put in quotation particularly, and also the opening line 'losing time in you' reminds me of how it feels spending time with my better half... but it never feels like time wasted, more the opposite, like time well spent.
Anyway, I thought I'd drop a comment with a little more insight than just saying 'great poem' as I could be completely wrong and it is a poem about two very close friends. I'm interested to know if I hit the nail on the head, or not?
Poetry can be so subjective. By the way, I did think it was a great poem as well 🙂
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