I don't really know what to tell you. Sometimes content just doesn't get consumed and that's just how it be. It happens to my content and it happens to pretty much everyones elses content.

If I were to give some critique to this post it would be that the tutorial on how to get the dragon armor lasts for an hour. Shorter content often gets consumed more than longer content.

It's not really up to me what makes good or bad content. You just gotta try some stuff out and see what works out. $0.28 is still better than what you would have made on Facebook or Reddit.