Hey writers!
I made a post about my childhood where I innocently swallowed * ******!
I wonder if it is too graphic or if I need to change anything. I would love your feedback
https://steemit.com/writing/@pippininja/innocence-is-bliss-or-is-it
I'm not really a writer but I get inspired sometimes. Everyone I've told this story to has had a physical reaction to it. So, I need help with making it read-worthy.
Thank you all in advance.
