RE: RE: Bottle tops in the rain
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RE: Bottle tops in the rain

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This seems a collection of related poems, each of which I like a lot. The whole has me trying to fit them together.Seems you use a lustful love with unfortunate side effects as metaphor for several world conditions. So many great lines in this!
Where we know the names of the war mongers and death dealers by heart
And yet can hardly raise a cheer for anyone who speaks peace?

I am the ageless in your temple.
I am the stardust on your throne.
What are you going to do now?

Sing like weasels to the merciful god to save us.

to name just a few.

@owasco: This seems a | Ecency