Excellent! This is the scene the sailor sees, and it's calling him. I love it!
You should be able to click on the link in my post to get to the contest. Here it is again. https://steempeak.com/haikucontest/@bananafish/mizu-no-oto-every-image-has-its-haiku-edition-39-english
You don't need to make it into a whole post if you don't want to, you can just put the haiku in the comments, but you'd get some upvotes on a post if you posted it too. I do both.