Excellent! Love the way you brought the two named characters back as adults. Bit of a bleak ending, which I liked a lot. That Charlie, always dodging living his destined life. Except the writing.
Next time tag @freewritehouse so that community is better able to find you. Wewrite is a subset of that. And if you haven't done any of @marianewest's daily freewrites, I'm sure we would love to have see some of those from you.
This is great.