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RE: Keep Going

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This poem captures my mindset to a T, but these two (reproduced out of order) are especially salient to me:

there’s so much to be
curious about,
no shortage of things to feel
completely in awe of,
so much kindness,
so many small miracles.
Focus on that and
more of it will come your way.

refuse to be a victim


I hope I don't overstep with a grammatical consideration. I believe that "each" and "every one" are singular nouns and need singular verbs to go with them.

Every one of us
are imperfect

every one of us is imperfect seems better to me.

Or:

Each of us are like
a ball of yarn

Each of us is like a ball of yarn works for me.

@owasco: This poem captures | Ecency