This is quite a thought provoking poem. For instance, I wonder at the meanings of these two lines:
success comes from the foundations of our decisions
and
Philosophy brings practical applications of universal laws of spiritual grandeur
I'm not sure what you mean by either of these. I've been thinking recently, now that I am old and grey, about how philosophers from way way back and up until now have asked the same universal questions down at the level of assumptions (what makes something good for one), yet come up with different practical applications. Seems to me you are pondering postulates, the imponderable. Nice. I enjoyed this foray into deeper thought. Thanks.