Hello Bro..
The rap was really incredible, it was so long but you tried to get every bit of it and I applaud you for that.
P.S: Every community has their rules and regulations and for Hive Openmic, you are supposed to tell we your listeners a little bit about the song you're presenting so we can catch up with your presentation better. Maybe in Vibes community you don't have to but Hive Openmic is a different community with their own unique rules you have to adhere to..
I will leave you with the community rules so you can read it and get yourself conversant with it..
@hiveopenmic/community-guidelines-or-pautas-sugeridas-del-hive-open-mic-eng-esp