Too many lyrics and few explanation to as why you choose the song for your entry.
Just paste the first stanza and the chorus to any song you are covering.
The key didn't go well with your voice, it was straining and you couldn't even take the video far and ended it quickly.
You can reduce the key of the instrumental next time using Moises app, you should search for it on Google Play store or iOS.
You should try to make good quality contents Bro, braze up and do it better..