No, you wrote it as it should have been written. How else would I have felt so alive reading it? You have no idea, but thank you! I still marvel at the fact you came up with that and still enjoy recalling it.

Edit: I have much more to share, but for today I'm done. Go to bed!

I don't care if you quote me without mentioning me, I won't sue, flag or complain. I'll just smile and know you appreciated something I wrote.