I want to commend you for your creativity and imagination. Your story is intriguing and captures the reader's attention from the beginning. I love the way you describe April's experience and the different emotions she feels throughout her journey. It takes a lot of skill to create such a vivid and engaging story.

I encourage you to keep writing and exploring your ideas. Your talent is evident, and I believe that you have the potential to create something truly amazing. Don't be discouraged by self-doubt or negative feedback, but instead use it as motivation to continue growing and improving as a writer.

Thank you for sharing your story with us
Happy to be !ALIVE