Should not be more than 20 lines.

Your tone of expression is complexly intriguing. Enjoyed it. Cheers P.S: I'm also new here.

This was a good read. Timely for me in so many ways. Cheers

Love your use of diction. Cheers

Fathers are such heroes. Thank you for honoring them with this piece, hope someday I can live up to the image of the father painted in this piece. Well done. Cheers!

This was awesome. Love the instructional tone used. Advices well dished. Cheers. Do follow back!

Nice one. Cheers

Love is a beautiful thing but it's also often brings along sour outcomes. One of life's irony. This was epic. Cheers

Cheers. Following you now. Do follow back.

So far so good, feels like a land filled with milk and honey, no wonder the name "Hive". Lol that just gave me an idea for my next piece. I'm digressing, sorry. Thank you once again bro. Exciting

Thank you for your comment. Much obliged. Cheers.

This is awesome,like the way you allowed the wind to guide you has you flew through every word in this piece. Cheers.

Wow, I enjoyed reading your perspective on my piece, very intelligent. I'm only new to the hive community, been doing poetry for over a decade now. Would appreciate if you could direct me towards other

Thank you for your comment, tip and reposting. Find it very encouraging. Thank you.

Thank you! Excited to be here!

*being Thank you so much for the vote guys, so encouraging, keep voting :) cheers

Will keep that in mind. Thanks man.

Well still trying to navigate well enough lol, trying to see how it works, commenting on a lot of post just to get peoples attention in the community. I don't mind if you can help we repost my posts as

Nice.

This was brilliant I have to admit. Cheers