Excellent start! Fascinating that the demon character has a "human" side.

I've been looking into the Lester Dent formula for my own short fiction. Any advice on how to best implement it?

This...this is the good stuff right here. I can tell that you are honing your craft as a writer. I am truly excited to see where this goes!

Loved the story! It's just a story right? Not based on true events?

The 'Reversed Black Maria' universe is much, much larger than we know, isn't it?

As someone who has had his fair share of ratmen encounters, this is a 100% accurate description of how they talk and act. Don't give me that "Not All Ratman Are Like That" nonsense. They cannot

I am still in the 2nd Amendment section of the podcast and it's great! P.S. Thank you for NOT pronouncing the "s" in Illinois.

I would say that all's well that ends well, but with Inna involved, I am not sure that anything ends well. In any case, I enjoyed the story and am looing forward to more!

She took what she wanted...all of it.

As much as I may criticize modern-day politicians, I have never thought that they might eat me (except for former New Jersey governor Chris Christie). While I read this story, I went back and forth about

I am glad you enjoyed it! It took a while to get this written, but I hope it was worth the wait.

I am speechless. Also... MORE!

Once you figure out how to livestream, let me know. I want to give it a try, too!

You keep the twists a comin'! Can't wait for Part 13!

Thank you for including my story!

I forgot to turn my microphone on.

Ignore this. I screwed up pretty badly.

Of course the Steem Dollar to US is only 1:2 right now. It used to be 1:4 😭

It looks like a "dlive" account upvoted this stream

This seems a lot smoother than the DOOM video was. I don't know if that is just my computer or what.