Great story. If I say I’m not angry though, I’ll be lying. Do you realise you have still not told us the reason, just an excuse he thought to use? I get that life doesn’t fix all the puzzles sometimes

So this song got me remembering my late Grand Dad and put a big smile on my face, lovely. Didn't even know all the lyrics before now. Now I have to say thank you!

This is a serious walk down history lane. Great work you did here, I have always been proud of being from Abeokuta, let's just say I got a whole lot prouder...lol. You gracefully lit the whole place up,

Thanks. I am glad you got that and that you liked both versions.

Thanks a lot, my appreciation in plenty. You write great things as well @dante31

@hopehuggs true words right there and I must say the world makes a lot of noise, pulling you here and there. Focus helps listen to purpose. Thanks enormously

I’ll be lying if I say I didn’t laugh. I just had to burst into laughter upon completion. @dante31 this makes all the sense, as in - each line. Although an unsung hero, you made it a poetic one, it sure

You welcome

Okay, will do

So sometimes I read poetry and don’t connect, other times I fairly get it but this got me. I caught myself giggling at a point with the effect you caused in this poem. You are great, don’t stop and my

@carmalain Thanks, I appreciate your comment. Love that line as well and just had to include it. Thanks for the vote of confidence I’m encouraged. Wow!!! Went to your blog and I am glad I did, your poetry

Thanks...I guess it just flowed like that in my mind and I dropped it. to describe what culture has done to God. That wasn’t what I was portraying though but I guess art is fluid. I meant, humans have

Every line I was to re-quote has already been. So I’m just gonna say that this was beautifully thought out and perfectly written.

Yes it does. They are coming amd I am looking forward to more of yours as well. Saw your ‘Roses are red...’, great flow to that poem. Keep it up and thanks for branching here.

Wow... I see what you did with this poem right from the start and it’s creative, lovely.

Thanks so much. I appreciate the comment and I am definitely encouraged to do more. I actually tried getting a picture at least but with the time frame, couldn’t get the one that clicked with my heart

Thanks, I’ll do my best. Went right to your post...go check it out. Thanks again, my appreciation is plenty.

Thanks for the comment on my post. Read yours and I think there is a mistake or two in some sentences, read through your post again carefully and edit as soon as possible. If you don’t find any, let me

@d-pend yeah, I did that immediately.

This is an eye opener. Shows you took your time to research it out, thanks for this.