You are a good story teller and i love your choice of words,i believe that if you use the right tags for your

story you will get more visibility,i believe it would also be nice to post pictures of the game which inspired the

story so that people can have more visual idea about the factor behind the inspiration for the story,i have

really noticed that stories with pictures tend to get more readers than stories with no pictures so i will advice you

to add pictures relating to your story so that you can give people the visual experience that comes with your

captivating story...it will not be a bad idea if you turn your story into a book and sell it on websites like amazon