Okay dear curator. What should I correct in order to get a vote?

Dear @darrellbassman

You know that the vote is not the most important, right?

Btw I gave you my vote already.

As I explained, in your next entry at the beginning of the video say the words Hive open Mic, week (there you say the number of the week) and your hive username. It is a dedicated video, made just for that event.

The best thing is to go through the community feed and check how others are doing the presentation and all. That is the best way to learn and also meet new people.

Have fun :)