Interesting, at the end of my reading I didn't need paracetamol which seems to me to show that you are very good at this writing exercise.
I hope this short comment will motivate you to supervise the addition of what you wrote about the OBI protocol to the whitepaper and take the opportunity to do the same about what you wrote for the last change on the voting windows and any other elements that would be appropriate to put in (as the expiration of governance votes).
ps: If you have a link explaining as well how the scheduled block producers work in detail I would be interested as I'm having a hard time understanding its exact process.
ps: why can't we use the same options for the reward on comments as on posts (e.g.: decline the reward), what logic led to this differentiation? It's something that has nothing to do with the subject of your post but that disturbs me every time I would have used it.
RE: One-Block Irreversibility for Delegated Proof-Of-Stake (DPOS)