That was an interesting solution. By this, I mean the main conflict of the entire story. The conflict between fear and creativity. In this story, there is a very thin demarcation line between both of these torrents. I was curious about the internal dynamic move that you would choose in order to elevate the character from the "abyss" of fear to the "valley" of creativity. In other words, what would be "Adrianna's thread" that will lead him from the dark cave to the light?

Sure enough, you made the right decision and made the protagonist fell in love with the victim. Good thinking. They are both strong feelings, but love trumps fear. Great job! 👍