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Yeah. That sounds great! Also, perhaps, consider changing the prompt to fit your narrative. In the prompt Jan is kind of unattractive. She's very loud, brush and sure Toby tolerates her at work, but he wanted to kind of get away from her in the club. So change this to her having a more vibrant and pleasing personality and Tony waiting for the opportunity to dance with her. That is also beneficial if you'd want to post your story somewhere else. Otherwise, you'd be infringing on Zelda's rights.
RE: We-Write #14: At the Club/Between heart and mind