A very unusual take at the theme I should say. Even though nowadays it might be not so unusual when we hear about cases like this in the news. Also, I liked how you've hit on all the clues in the prompt.

Nice and short. The compliments of "@owasco's editing tips I gathered. That's great.

Something that was culturally revealing...

Accountants were supposed to be boring, but Jan had blue hair, tattoos, and a stud in her nose.

I guess I kind of get it. Jan was all bright colored and, in terms of the dress code, this is more diverse than just a business suit. But it seems to me that this phrase implied a broader generalization i.e. a ring in a nose implies that a person is more interesting than the one who doesn't have this ring in a nose. Am I following the cultural pattern here?

Susan McClain --"Plain Jane McClain"

That was pretty funny. So she brought her own firearm in the nightclub. That's an interesting idea. With the purpose of self-defense, I presume. Jane McClain indeed. )

It was also cute how she shot the killer and asked Toby to be quiet about it. A nice detail! It tells a lot about her character. )))