Hi @medusaeffect,
I read your freewrite 2 times and understood each word separately, but the references cited in your internal monologue evaded me.
What happened to your granddaughter? What did it have to do with the woman who called you about her ovarian cyst, and her half-drunk mother-in-law? What did it have to do with you?
I've got the feeling that your daughter-in-law had an abortion. If I am right - that sucks.
RE: Churning