As usual, I enjoyed your writing style. There are a special flow and rhythm in your writing. It's like a wave.

For me, it's a little hard to understand what went on. I gather Frat Boys were the guys from a gang who robbed the church. If so why did Captain Li stated that chasing Frat Boys was not worth police time?

“If y'all would spend more time enforcing good law and order on the populations that most need it instead of chasing down frat boys who were just having a little fun last week, I think Big Loft would be better off.”