RE: RE: We-Write #9: The Classroom + Last Week's Winners Announced!
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RE: We-Write #9: The Classroom + Last Week's Winners Announced!

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I like how you've extended the topic in an unusual direction. And the character is fleshed out well - he's such a wanderer. It seems like he is not rooted into any kind of cultural tradition. He's really not a child of his parents, but as if someone used them as a vessel for his delivery into this world. Nice writing!

@mgaft1: I like how you've | Ecency