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Hi deeanndmathews!
A very well written novel quality writing, characterizations, and dynamic plot development. Enjoyable read!
One thing is not clear to me when is this action set in time.
On one hand, the officers mentioning that the described time isn't 1819. If one of them is 45 years of age then it must be 1863 or so - a year close to the end of the Civil War. On the other hand, the text mentions desktop publishing software, which appeared only at the end of the 20th century.
Once I understand the time when this is set, it will be easier for me to appreciate other fine points of your novel.
Cheers!
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