I like it.
My 2 cents. It was still a bit technical for general onboarding of the masses.
Joe Public is all " WTF is an NFT? New F-ing Technology?"
And Joe doesn't understand why "Open Source" important to him! Oh, hold on, I'm sorry Joe doesnt even know what Open Source is let alone why its important.

Make a video that focuses on the difference between the "mainstream" and hive.
Point out all the censorship and corporate control with the "mainstream" and how hive avoids that.

And most importantly.

Why anyone should care.

Thanks for what you are doing.
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