Trying to fix a drawing that i didn't like

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Hey everyone, i am not posting something completely new today but something that i only posted a few days ago. because of low space on my ipad i can't actually keep any files so i have constantly delete them. while i was going to delete this drawing i thought, this actually doesn't look greate. specifically the face shape. should i at least give it a bit of try to fix it?

so i did. the face shape before looked so awful and honestly i do like how this new version turned out. it has more cartoony look but i think thats okay. not only i changed the face shape but also pushed the light a little bit.

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Here is the first version i posted. i do think it looks awful.
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you can find the original post here with all the process shots and other information: @masummim50/portrait-painting-tld6iu

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