RE: RE: Piecemeal descent / A lost invention / Where no ivy may creep
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RE: Piecemeal descent / A lost invention / Where no ivy may creep

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I love the way you opened each stanza with imageries d-pend@d-pend

I am drawn into the pulsing circuits of the past —
geometries of crumbling memory-bricks in tattered walls

This style is unique! And taking the II — A lost invention into consideration, I see this a way different from others (it is like a prosaic form of writing — prose poetry), do you mean to put this into a prose poetry?


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