Hi. This post seems to be a great story. It has good characters, good dialogues and a nice description. It's something long for me on a screen. If I were reading a book, on paper, I would have no problem.
It contains some good science fiction moments. I congratulate you!
I also loved the irony with certain characters that are obviously in the real world.
Best regards @ultimatewrestlin, I hope to read the third part