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I think it was good not to place his prosthetic jaw. First, because after such a dramatic narration, like the one you did, the story was going to lose pace with a discovery like this (it seems like a joke).
Second, by not writing down what Richard discovered in the bathroom, the reader has his imagination to complete the scene.
Your outcome is right!
RE: Short Story (The Pearly Gates Are Plastic)