Congratulations to everybody! I liked every single final. I have a feeling of having spent my time very well reading all the entries. The participants in this contest are very familiar with effective narrative

The intertwining of temporal plans is what gives value to your story. You have created a mirror game that deceives the reader more than once, until the final horror. Really well done! At first, the reader

You built the tension very well. Honestly, I thought it would end very badly for the two unwary boys. Up until the end, I saw them already dead.

The issue of climate change is becoming really pressing. I think that here in Italy we are one of the few countries in the world where this subject is underestimated by public opinion, distracted as we

Even in the serious danger of a climate catastrophe, the thirst for power makes some human trying to prevaricate over the others. But he who sows the wind picks up a storm, and Giselle takes her revenge

The union of collage and poetry creates an assembly that I like. I think the poem has a nice rhythm, I tried to read it aloud with my bad English and it flowed very well. I think you could try composing

Beautiful fantasy... reading your story was refreshing for my mind. I think it could be the first part of a fairy tale for children or young adults :)

Very beautiful! I really like your prose, it's very "realistic", as if it were really the words of this "trashonaut". I was fascinated by the naturalness with which you make worldbuilding

A good science-fiction story! I enjoyed it. You only need to adjust a little bit the dialogues: in English, there isn't the use of the 3rd person as a sign of respect, nor the 3rd plural insted of the

Correcto! Mizu No Oto en espanol saliò ayer... te esperamos! ;)

Reading your continuation, I breathe drama, sense of danger, mystery. I'm breathtaking! It's your great ability to convey feelings without actually explaining anything of the mysterious facts that involved

I didn't expect the second twist! I was expecting a science fiction drift, which was confirmed for me when gennadiy is sprayed by that strange liquid...something supernatural, or a science fiction version

This was a prompt worthy of a long story, at least a few thousand words, but as usual the ax of the Russian lumberjack has done his duty pruning everything that was not essential. I hope you like it, it's

Yay! More time, more stories! I'm sorry for your loss, Moko surely had a beautiful life and received much love from you.

Let me continue the conversation with my personal account. When I write a haiku in English, I also prefer the 3/5/3 form (following Keiko Imaoka), but in 33 editions of Mizu No Oto contest I noticed many

Oh, ok! I understand! It's a very peculiar style. Good vibes!