Reading your article, it struck me as being really well-thought out, and I appreciate the way you discussed some of Bylund's writing arguments. I particularly appreciated how you defined the economy at the outset of your essay. Like many others, I've always viewed the economy as a machine that needs to be maintained by the administration or other industries, depending on how well or poorly it was built. I also really like the way that you discussed the market in the opening parts of your article, because it can be a very complicated topic, and it is good to get as much quality information as possible. I also liked how you used the word "exchange" a lot, because I fell that that is a very good word to use when discussing the market. I also really like that you discussed different ways to be more successful in the market such as being more efficient when buying resources and goods.

The economy is about how entrepreneurs create services and products to satisfy the needs and wants of consumers.

I really like your quote here because I believe that entrepreneurs are an extremely important part of this nation's economy, and I believe that the economy truly relies on entrepreneurship. Small businesses are crucial to the economy being its most healthy version of itself. Entrepreneurship is a very complicated field to get into, and I really liked how your article dove in to what they must do in order to be successful. There is a lot of different aspects that lead to an entrepreneurs success, but I really like the things that you touched on in this article. Entrepreneurs come at all different ages and have many different talents which is what makes all of them very unique. You also discussed how entrepreneurs often have lots and lots of money and time invested in their field, so it is important for them to be dedicated to their venture in order to be successful. Overall, I felt that you discussed a lot of good things, and I felt that you used your quotes very well. I also thought that your use of pictures was very good, and the overall layout of your article was very well thought out and was easy to follow and read.