Beautiful description of a beloved. Your words paint a splendid picture of someone you adore - it is like a snapshot of your definition of perfection. The flow of the poem is very suiting, as it doesn't rush the reader to jump from one line to the next - it gives time to fully absorb the emotions you poured out into each word.

I noticed your repetitive comparisons - the use of the word 'like' is evident in every sentence. I find this interesting, as it creates a sense of distance, evoking in me a feeling of admiration from afar. The poetry of the words is symphonic - musical in its prime - but at times lacks depth which comes with intimacy.

Judging by this and the title you chose, I am made to believe that the person whom this poem is for and about is not someone you have an intimate relationship with yet admire tons. I would love to hear more about this.

Thank you for sharing! I really dig your style and see beauty in your words. Keep writing, and I wish you the best of luck with this person!

If you have some time and are interested, I invite you to have a look at my blog where I post my own poetry - you may find something you find interesting there, who knows!? Once again, thanks for sharing!

Luka.