Marvellous! You truly did a great job at diving into love and describing its depths. As you stated, our choices lead to our experiences, and mistakes are run on the alter of our thoughts; this implies that we have a big say in what we experience, and I would even add that all experiences are magnificent in their own way since all teach us one thing or another, yet the idea of mistakes being ultimately tied to our thoughts makes me think... could we possibly we seperate from our thoughts? The identification of self with the thoughts that go on in our minds is what leads to these so called 'mistakes', yet by simply experiencing life, which in truth is love manifested in countless forms, we experience 'love in balance'- life in its totality!

This is just something that came to me after reading your poetry. I have been a follower of yours in the past, a good few months ago, yet I have been gone from Steem for 4 months, sometimes posting odd pictures here and there, but am now back in the full swing of things and am glad to see you still on here, growing and becoming influential. I write poetry and have loads of projects coming up in the near future. If you are interested, I invite you to read some of my poems on my blog.

Thanks for posting this nicely put, thought-provoking poem.

Lukasz.