Beautiful imagery. 'While the rooster has announced the morning...' really hit me; it had an immense visual impact on me. As a poem, I believe that it lacks structure, yet it is evident that you know what you are talking about and can write well, getting your message across. I would love to see more of this, perhaps turned into a short story or some sort of essay. Well done regardless!

If you have some free time, I invite you over to my blog to read some of my poetry as I am back on Steem now after being away for a while.

Thanks, and well done!

Lukasz.