Impressive your collection and transmission of information, you must have a great command of the subject although I also think it is important to know different perspectives and opinions on the subject. What do other people think about the subject? How can you argue against some of these opinions? These are things to keep in mind when making a pubilcation of this type.

In summary, I think you have done an excellent job of conveying your ideas in a clear and concise manner. I would love to know more about your creative process in writing this article and learn about different perspectives on the topic. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us!