That journal club series is a great initiative. I hope you will get a lot of comments and questions. I am somehow pursuing the same goal in particle physics for years, although the amount of interactions with other users is quite limited at the present time (summer days, small SteemSTEM community, etc. Who knows).

Personally, it was a bit hard to read at the beginning because of the large usage of jargon. But at the end, the post is fairly understandable and I do not end with any particular question.